He often sat in a small bar,dringing and smoking considerably more than is good for his health.这句话语法上对么

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He often sat in a small bar,dringing and smoking considerably more than is good for his health.
这句话语法上对么

恩,前后没什么联系~
前面是一般过去时,后边变成了一般现在时的陈述句~
你要表达什么意思啊?

听起来有点别扭
他总是做在一个小酒馆里,烟酒过度对他的身体没好处

He often sat in a small bar,drinking and smoking considerably more than what was good for his health.
他经常坐在一个小酒馆里,过度地吸烟喝酒