He often sat in a small bar,dringing and smoking considerably more than is good for his health.

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He often sat in a small bar,dringing and smoking considerably more than is good for his health.
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He often sat in a small bar,drinking and smoking considerably more than what was good for his health.
他经常坐在一个小酒馆里,过度地吸烟喝酒