英文短句改错…急

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英文短句改错…急
这几句话哪些地方有错啊?person's age no longer tells you something about his social position,marriage or healthy.There's no longer a particular year which one goes to school or goes to work or gets married or start a family.

healthy改为health
something改为anything
which改为when
start 改为starts