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According to the survey reflect: People need to have a good personal hygiene habits that contribute to the prevention and treatment of disease.
Through this survey we know that people understand the health knowledge. Can understand the new disease, and thus more effective to deal with disease, but there are a few people without a strong awareness of prevention and protection, because they have bad hygiene practices. People should pay attention to personal hygiene, and more to the outdoor fresh air, wash hands, good rest. This will increase our immunity to disease prevention, to observe good personal hygiene diet.
According to the above, and many experts believe that disease prevention is most important is to start from the individual, good personal hygiene can prevent the occurrence of disease. The face of the epidemic in public places regularly disinfected regularly, wash hands, indoor multi-ventilation. Attention to personal hygiene may be effective in preventing epidemics. Use the advantages of a good habit more for people's attention.
Our study is the occurrence of the disease before, through our good personal hygiene and other measures to prevent and reduce the occurrence of diseases, to ensure that our bodies stay healthy.
According to our survey, all of our evidence that good hygiene can be effective in preventing diseases that argument should pay attention to personal hygiene.

According to the survey : People should have a good personal hygiene habits which contribute to the prevention and treatment of diseases. Through this survey we could say that people who have the know...