英语重复句子单词改写

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英语重复句子单词改写
the percentage of people who say they cannot live without their television increase as the number of ages increase.这句话怎么改写 主要是把increase改写

这句话有个几个语法错误:
Number of ages,age(年龄)是不可数的,number of ages(年龄的次数)这样说不合理.
Percentage是单数,所以应该是increases,不是increase.后面的 age 也接单数.
改完后:
The percentage of people who say they cannot live without their television increases as their age increases.