八上期末英语求评点打分
八上期末英语求评点打分
Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:
No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to schol all the time
No.2 Don't smoking for a long time
No.3 when you leave the house ,Please turn off the lights and TV
lf everyone can do that ,the air will become clean!满分20,检查语法错,并打分（跪求专业滴）
好者悬赏40,姐多的就是悬赏分!
gives 应改为has given 2. that 应改为 these3.go to school by bus. go to school by car 4.smoking 改为smoke5.leave house6.clean 改为 cleaner有一些语法错误,主旨比较清楚,要注意细节,自己多检...我这是八年级期末考试的作文，刚考完，我完成时没学，帮我打下分吧，满分20分，gives 应改为has given 4.smoking 改为smoke6.clean 改为 cleaner3.go to school by bus.go to school by car 都对的，没错，你帮我打分吧你的hat 应改为 these与leave house对了12-14分，个人意见。。前几天有事没上网，不好意思。