英文这么写对吗?

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英文这么写对吗?
念你的名字,才发觉我已经失去你 Call for you,there's no more you
你不在爱我了 是不是?I know you don't love me anymore,doesn't it?
没了你 我什么都不是 I can't do anything without your help.
现在一切结束,我还该怎么活着?And now that it's over I dont know how I'm gonna get by

英文应翻译成如下:Call your name,I realize I've already lost youYou don't love me anymore,do you?Without you,I am nothingNow everything is over,how should I live afterwards?翻译时尽量注意避免语法错误...