She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
问题描述：
She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
答
很不错了。
（不过如果你是大学生，那么用词，造句什么的，要加强。）
答
还行。最好是in which
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整体还是不错,不过had 后面最好加一个a,也就是She threw a bottle which had a piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.