She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
问题描述：
She threw a bottle which had piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.请问这样说对吗?
答
整体还是不错,不过had 后面最好加一个a,也就是She threw a bottle which had a piece of paper with her name on it into the sea.