就是一个我自己写的句子不知道语法上有什么错误 具体的句子在补充中
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就是一个我自己写的句子不知道语法上有什么错误 具体的句子在补充中
A large number of undergraduates are eager to join the army than extremely demands advanced technology applied to mang military field.It is significant that the troop enrolls talent who possessed professional knowledge from university.再帮忙看下有没什么歧义 希望尽快回复多谢
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首行的than应改为that；technology applied to mang military field改为technology in military fields更简洁；最后一句改为It is significant that the troop should enroll talent with professional knowledge ac...