英语翻译

问题描述:

英语翻译
从事货物和技术的进出口业务
1、洛阳轴研建设开发有限公司;
2、涧西区珠江路42号街坊-15幢;
3、洛阳市涧西区吉林路2号综合楼1楼.

Business includes the import and export of cargos and technologies

Luoyang Bearing Research Establishment and Development Co., Ltd

Block 15, Community No.42, Pear River Road, Jianxi District

1st Floor, Complex Building No. 2, Jilin Road, Jianxi District

注:街坊在这里暂译为community社区,居民小区

请问这个翻译的语法是对的吗?因为很慎重 出一点错都不行的语法应该没问题,第一句也可改成Dealing with the business of import and export of cargos and technologies或Business scope covers the import and export of cargos and technologies

珠江路Pear River Road也可改成Zhujiang Road

放心吧,慎重的翻译