帮我改改错误,
问题描述：
帮我改改错误,
I have almost two years of working experience in designing,I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin,I have a wide range of interest which includes drawing,music,etc.
The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,AutoCAD,3dMax
Because I have a real confidence in myself,So I urgently crave for dear sir can recruit me,I will prove my ability and test my will to accept all the new challenges for rewarding I would be employed by you.
有没有什么语法错误就行了,我的目的是能让老外看得懂就可以了,并不是发表什么论文/
答
I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin should be:I have good communicaton skills with both oral english and mandarin.看起来你的语句是简历上用的,整体的语句用法感觉比较生涩.建议你多看一些英语...