I feel even better today 英语日记帮忙修改July thirteenth friday 2007 sunny turn shower small windIt is a happy day.it is a special day.Happy day!because my heart feel even better today.special day!because it is a birthday of one of her parents.the same,it is a birthday of one of my sister.i sent the message to she for best wish in english.hehe,i sent the message to my brother "my heart become better than better".but i still love she i had wanted a lot of stor
I feel even better today 英语日记帮忙修改
July thirteenth friday 2007 sunny turn shower small wind
It is a happy day.it is a special day.Happy day!because my heart feel even better today.special day!because it is a birthday of one of her parents.the same,it is a birthday of one of my sister.i sent the message to she for best wish in english.hehe,i sent the message to my brother "my heart become better than better".but i still love she i had wanted a lot of story about she.and i with she.
1.It is a happy day and it is a special day.
如果你想分开书写,那么第二句的It必须是大写.
2.because it is a birthday of one of her parents.the same,it is a birthday of one of my sister.这句有点乱,还很费解.
改:Because it is her father's (or mother's) birthday as well as one of my sisters' birthday.
3.a message.泛指,因为前面没有提到message内容,不能用the表示特指.
4.I sent a message to she with my best wishes in English.
5."my heart become better than better".楼主是想表达自己心情越来越好吗?如果是就改成I become happier and happier.
最后一句实在不懂你想表达什么,对不起.