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I have a wonderful dream.I want to be admitted into Beijing Medical University and be a good doctor in the future.I'm eager to put on the white uniform of a doctor.White means pure and clean.I hope to help a lot of people have health bodies.
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I have a great dream.I want to be a fresh man about the Beijing Medical University and be a good doctor in future when I passed the examnations.It is my only wish to be dressed the white uniform .The ...