英语:有一句话有语病,请帮忙改下,

问题描述:

英语:有一句话有语病,请帮忙改下,
Secondly,the plight of the hero to face the spirit of hard work which is a great impact on me.

单纯从语法上分析得话,把which去掉即可,即:
Secondly,the plight of the hero to face the spirit of hard work is a great impact on me.
主语 the plight,系动词 is,表语 impact.