谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)
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谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)
Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me with the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because l'm their only son.So l think not only my friends but also my parents are the important people in my heart.And l believe that love will arrive every corner in the world in the near future.
请问3楼的,我这个在中考可以拿几分?
中考是18分.....大家都给打下分
答
文章写得好,鼓励!但是有拼写错误：第二排的amang应该是among.第四排的with the trouble多余了,删掉就可以了.第五句想表达的意思是：因为我是他们唯一的儿子.Yes?那么翻译错了.应该是：Because I'm their son the onl...