请帮我批阅一下英语小作文（3）.写5－8句左右的句子,要求意思明确,内容连贯,括号内的词供选用（delicious hate favourite be good for don't care for be bad for)My favourite food is mushroom.Because they taste delicious.And it's good for our health.I hate fast food .Because it's bad for our health.Which food do you like best?
请帮我批阅一下英语小作文（3）
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写5－8句左右的句子,要求意思明确,内容连贯,括号内的词供选用（delicious hate favourite be good for don't care for be bad for)
My favourite food is mushroom.Because they taste delicious.And it's good for our health.I hate fast food .Because it's bad for our health.
Which food do you like best?
多用一些复合句式会更好一些
比如说 从句、并列句……
My favourite food are mushrooms.
They taste delicious.What's more ,they'are good for our health.
Fast food is what I hate.Because it's bad for our health.
It contains too much heat.
Which food do you like best?
稍微有改动，变得稍稍生动点，呵呵，希望你能吸纳我的建议
其实你可以用些连接词,Because用一次就好My favourite food is mushroom.Because it tastes delicious.And it's also good for our health.while fast food is the food which i hate most,for it's bad effect on h...