英语翻译
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英语翻译
当Tristan再次回到家时,鲁德罗上校步履蹒跚的走出房门的样子使我非常震惊.他在小黑板上歪歪斜斜写下我很高兴的词语.这一切的一切,我们看到的是一个孤独无助,但决不向痛苦命运低头的老人.
When Tristan came back home again,I was shocked by the shambling way that Colonel Wlliam Ludlow walked out from the room.He shivering wrote down a word that HAPPY on the blackboard.After all,we saw a lonely and helpless old man whom would never lower his head to the painful and cruel fate.
答
由于是手机,有字数上限,只提几点,步履蹒珊那句可改为I am aghast at his shambling gait as he walked out.shivering可提前.最后一句whom改为who.lower改为droop