英语句子修改 academic writing
问题描述：
英语句子修改 academic writing
36% of interviewees tend to purchase in exclusive shops,and footwear stores are the second with the number of 30% 21% stated that they prefer to purchase online,with the consumption in shopping malls merely accounting for 13%.
36%喜欢去专卖店30%去鞋店21%选择网购13%选择去大型超市（买跑鞋）
语言要formal.
啊啊啊我要疯掉了QAQ明天要交了各位求帮忙!随便怎么样只要formal语法正确是这个意思就好!
Thx very much!
答
36% of interviewees tend to purchase shoes in exclusive shops,and footwear store is the second choice with the percentage of 30%.21% interviewees stated that they prefer to purchase online.Finally,only 13% interviewees choose to buy shoes in large shopping mall.
你这是看图表数据写小作文吧,我这边在你的基础上改了点,语句比较简单,但是没有错误.