帮我看看有没有语法错误、There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exuberant,It is cooler under the trees.Oh,there is a big lake in the park .Let’s go and have a look!The weather was very hot.So many people go to there.They like swimming in the lake,but I think it’s very dangerous.Ther take their dogs

go to there去掉to,因为there是副词。Let’s go and have a look!改为 Let’s go there and have a look!So many people go to there.同上去掉to。Ther改为they.

There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go/ there.
The park is not very big,but it’s very beautiful. There are lots of trees and flowers/in it. In this/ summer, these trees grow very exuberant,It is cooler under the trees.
Oh,there is a big lake in the park .
Let’s go and have a look!
/when the weather is very hot so many people will go to there.They like /to swim in the lake,but I think it’s very dangerous.
They always take their dogs for a walk in the park;they all have a good time in the park.

第三行“exuberantly”
第六行“is”“去掉to”

题目？？？

第一行：去掉“to”
第四行：去掉“the”或改成“summertime”(固定搭配)
第四行：“cooler”改成“cool”
第七行：“was”改成“is”
So many people go to there中删to
(顺便提醒一下,here、there、home前面不加任何介词）

第一行去掉to，第二行去掉in the summer中的the，exuberant是形容词，可以把grow改成are,倒数第三行去掉to，

During the summer holiday I often go to there.
中删to.
In the summer中删the
It is cooler under the trees.中cooler改成cool
The weather was very hot中was改成is，时态要一致
So many people go to there中删to
Ther take their dogs for a walk in the park中ther改成they