这两句话有什么语法错误 怎么修改

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这两句话有什么语法错误 怎么修改
Chinese parents usually expect too high of their children as a result of dream education.
They should not set strict rules as don’t go there or don’t go out with your friends.

完善後的句子是:1 Chinese parents usually expect too MUCH of their children as THE result of dream education.2 They should not set strict rules ABOUT WHETHER you should or not go out with your friends...为什么是asthe result of呢你好。这里the result是特指的,是dream education导致的特定结果。