哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误

哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误
看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,
Now coming the first holiday since I went to college,the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study all by myself.
Six months of college life have taught me a lot,So this is what I dream of university life,there were faint sense of loss,but there are more surprises,I've met a lot of new friends,and I has also experien ced a lot of impressive things.Now go home,I would like to be properly chat with my parents the life I have six monthsI have been living.