帮我纠错一段英语短文
帮我纠错一段英语短文
Do you know Leonardo Dicaprio?Many people called him Jake ten years ago ,but now many people call him "one of the highest paid actors in Hollywood " .
He is famouse all over the world becouse of Titanic .
If you don't know Leo,you will not know he was very thin before .
Prince,fatty,liar or lunatic ,no matter who he is ,there are his lovers .That 's where his charm lies
第三句 换成 He became famous all over the world because of Titanic.第四句话文意有些不通啊 这段总体没什么语法错误,但是很中国啊 把你第一句的都换成被动语态吧帮我换一下好吗，然后把修改的一段发过来Do you knowLeonardoDicaprio?Many called him” Jake ”ten years ago who is one of the most highlyy paid actors in Hollywood now . He becamefamousallovertheworldbecouseofTitanic . ActuallyLeonardo wasverythinbefore .( 我不大明白你想说的意思啊)Prince, fatty,liar orlunatic ,nomatterwhoheis,therearehislovers .That 'swherehischarmlies 能用中文说你想写的句子吗？就是那句话，如果你不了解莱昂纳多，你不会知道他曾经狠狠的瘦过，你觉得这句话该怎么说Although he is very health currently,he has been emaciated at one time. 改成这句好了 你那句原话不大像是外国人说的啊啊啊你说的这句好难啊，能不能简单点，不过你觉得我那句同学们能明白吗Although he is very health currently,he has been thinat one time 这样好吧As I am excited about is that disappear in a meaningful movie, as well as a meaningful role这句话有错吗有错啊 as 用在开头是因为 而且是从句才可以用 What I am excited aboutis that disappear in a meaningful movie, as well as a meaningful role.