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关于英语文章纠错
After reading , I have a deep feeling. The Robinson very like sailing and adventure. He did not ingore his father’s advice and choosed go to sea. During his sailing to the Africa, He met a big storm and the ship 触礁. All the sailor have been dead, The Robinson is the only people survived in the big storm. He was sent by waves to the alone island. This island did not any people and Robinson can only heard birl singing and saw goats. He found a place to set up a tent where near the water source and can stop attacked form wild animals.In this island, Robinson met many difficults and setbacks,such as disease、lonely even storm and earthquake.But this all was cameover by Robinson. He domesticated the goats and parrot,breeded a dog and two cats,planted barley and rice and saved the *er from the cannibals. The Robinson called *er Friday, He became a best friendy with Robinson. In the way, the Robinson lived in this island for 28 years, Finylly he rectun to the England.
At the road of life, there was full of difficults and setbacks and there is only two choices one is move faward, the other one is back. Robinson choosed former,SO he created a miracle, he beat difficults by his will and wisdom. So, I will learn from Robinson. In the studying、living and working, I will like Robinson, did not give up any chance, never stop in the road of life,eliminate any difficults by my will and wisdom.
顺便翻译“触礁”
多谢!

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After reading ,I have a deep feeling.Robinson likeD sailing and adventure VERY MUCH.He did not IGNORE his father’s advice and CHOSE TO go to sea.During his sailing to Africa,He met a big storm and the ship HIT A ROCK触礁.All the sailorS WERE dead,The Robinson WAS the only people survived the big storm.He was sent by waves to AN island ALONE.This island did not HAVE any people and Robinson COULD only hear birDS singing and SEE goats GOING AROUND.He found a place to set up a tent near the water source ,WHICH COULD stop attackS form wild animals.In this island,Robinson met many difficultIES and setbacks,such as diseaseS、lonelINESS,even stormS and earthquakeS.But ALL OF THESE WERE OVERCOME by Robinson.He domesticated the goats and parrotS,BRED a dog and two cats,planted barley and rice and saved the *er from the cannibals.The Robinson called THE *er Friday,He became HIS best friend .In thIS way,the Robinson lived in this island for 28 years,FINALLY he rectunED to England.
At the road of life,there was full of difficultIES and setbacks and there WERE only two choices one WAS movING faward,the other one WAS GOING back.Robinson CHOSE former,SO he created a miracle,he OVERCAME THE difficultIES WITH his will and wisdom.So,I will learn from Robinson.In the studying、living and working,I will like Robinson,did not give up any chance,never stop in the road of life,eliminate any difficultIES WITH my will and wisdom.
顺便翻译“触礁”
多谢!

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