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In this class,I have practiced my oral presentation skills which increased my self-confidence of learning English.But most impressive to me was that when we discussed the film "Fire Proof" you shared the love between you and Thomas with us.You said that although after marriage there was less excitement then before,you still love him very much,and this love has risen to a kind of a new level which includes both love and affection.It was really a good lesson of love and I was really touched.

第一排 increased increase
第二排 but和most之间加个the was改为is
第四排 then改为than love改为loved has改为had
我觉得哦,不知道对不对...
应该有10处找不到了~