英语句子,请达人指正批评.

英语句子,请达人指正批评.
girl,my best friend,I was so sad
when I looked at your tears pouring
and cannot pretend that I understand your deep feeling
You know why he really left you
You know his mother what have done for you
I realize that It's hard for you to face the truth
But,that's true!that have happened and will past!
Don't be embarrassed,don't be afraid
Don't always depend on a man for your happiness
To Ignoring the terrible things
Approaching to the Sunshine
Cause we are girls
So Must be stonger and smarter
no man can compare To deserving your happiness
We should live for romance,for poetry,for love but never only for a man
我就是 写不好 我接受任何 批评指正！
达人可以写出你的，只要意思相近就OK的。然后背你写的句子哈。呵呵