请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!

请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!
这是自我介绍,我英语很烂,可能有很多问题,希望能帮我吧语法什么的改正确!
hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and has a long history like quanzhou.as we all know that the romance of the three kingdoms is china four masterpieces,the above mentioned several times in jingzhou .besides,jingzhou also has many celebrities,such as zhangjuzheng /liubei/guanyu/ect.they are the heroes of history.get down to business,i am a calm person maybe some people think that i am very invoverted.but once i determination of you,you will feel my passion!i like play football pingpang ball.i am glod to meet all of you and i hope we will become good friends!