帮我看看我的英语文章是否有语法问题,并提出来,说怎么错?如何改正?

帮我看看我的英语文章是否有语法问题,并提出来,说怎么错?如何改正?
Dear friend,Hi,My name is Tom.I'm a twelve-year-old boy.It's very exciting to have a American pen pal.Do you want to know about my school day?Well,let me tell you!I usually get up at around 6：00.Then I brush my teeth and wash my face.I run with my classmates at around half past six.Class starts at half past seven.I have lunch at around 12 o'clock.And then I go to bed in the noon.In the afternoon,class starts at half past two.At around six o'clock I have dinner.After the last class I go to bed at night.Today I'm very tired.And do you want to know about my hobbies?My favorite subjects are math and English.Math is kind of difficult but very interesting for me.And my English teacher is so strict with me.But I don't mind her.Because my good English is her teach.I like comedies best .Like Mr Bean,There are sons and daughters homeand more are all my favorite movies.I have a dog.It's cute.But if people are thieves,it's very unfriendly to them.Please writer soon and tell me about your life.