Help!Please watch my essay and let me konw if I'm wrong or not?
问题描述:
Help!Please watch my essay and let me konw if I'm wrong or not?
Hello!I'm a Chinese and I want to make friends with you to practice my English.
My English is poor that it is difficult for me to just reply.So it will take you little time to chat with me.
Is it ok?
答
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Hello!I'm (去掉a)Chinese and I want to make friends with you to practice my English.
My English is (加so构成so ...that句式)poor that it is difficult for me to just reply.So it will take you little(建议换成much,因为此处你感觉会给别人带来不便) time to chat with me.
Is it ok?
其他部分基本可以.