the one who may change my world,the one who may accept all my faults,is my real one.有语法错误么?

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the one who may change my world,the one who may accept all my faults,is my real one.有语法错误么?
可以再简练的说么?

没有语法错误,最好在第二个the one前面加一个and没法简练了,但是可以把前两分句合起来:the one who may change my world and (who may) accept all my faults is my real one.这句话的意思是那个什么什么样的人是我...