英语改错题,三处错误

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英语改错题,三处错误
At present,about 30% of the city'S families have computers.
Besides,many village people are more and more interested computers.
and some of whom even have bought computers .

At present,about 30% of the (city) families have computers.(这里不用所有格的,城市家庭就是city family)Besides,many village people are more and more interested (in) computers.And some of (them) even hav...