帮我看下这几句英文写得对不对
问题描述：
帮我看下这几句英文写得对不对
we realize that MSN is the most important tool of Macao teenagers,and they use it almost everyday
答
不是很对tool是让macao teenagers使用的 后面的and有点多余,我觉得应该改成：
we realize that MSN is the most important tool that Macao teenagers use,they use it almost everyday