能帮我看下我这句英文写得对不对,

问题描述:

能帮我看下我这句英文写得对不对,
Would your please help check and confirm your client’s email address.
中文背景
请检查并确认你客户的电邮地址.

不对 中文是陈述句 英语也应该是陈述句啊
改为
Please check and confirm your client’s email address.