请教高人帮我改下作文的病句错词,拜谢!
问题描述：
请教高人帮我改下作文的病句错词,拜谢!
Apart from their own factors,another factor contributing to a big rise in negative advertisements about atitude to life is not objective fact,which leads people to choose the wrong direction.
lead有没有好的同意替换词，
答
"除了他们自己的原因,还有一个因素也导致了关于生活态度的起消极作用的广告的增多,但是这个因素并不是客观事实,从而使人们被误导."
个人觉得,可以用which misleads people.也就是把lead改成mislead,这样后面to choose the wrong direction可以去掉了.
还有表示不太好的结果的,可以用results in (people choosing the wrong direction)
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