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My family
Hello!I‘m**.There are there people in my family.They are my mother and my father.My mother likes dancing.My father likes singing.Why do they like doing them?Because they think they are interesting.I can skip very well.I love my family very much.
另外楼主建议一下把My mother likes dancing.改成My mother‘s hobby is dancing.My father likes singing.改成My father’s hobby is singing.I can skip very well不用ing吗can是情态动词，情态动词后的动词全部用原型，所以不需要加ing