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Your
silence is that of a starry sky
As
remote and candid
I
like for you to be still

This love letter wasinspired by the recent popular TV series My Love
From the Star and wang leehom's song
you're not here. Stars, as well as poets and writers like to use the image,
because the stars shine through time, always give people imagine.

The
content of the letter with a hint of sadness, the stars are beautiful, like a
lover's silence is beautiful, distant, pure and sad. True beauty is not silent,
but the person I love.

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