请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!

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请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!
A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy
A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy many beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute things in my shop…
B:On.It sound very nice,umm..I want buy a watch to my mother for her birthday present.Is there any beautiful watch?
A:Oh.I’m sorry about it.We don’t have any watch to sell.But you can buy the other things instead for it.I promised,you can buy everything in my shop.

+beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute 重复,also,it should be as below,pretty ,useful,and cute +It sounds very nice.单数第三人称+her birthday is coming.她的生日要到了,or,today is her birthday.今天是她的生日+i...