请帮偶看看这句话写的对不对?

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请帮偶看看这句话写的对不对?
obviously she had a good time with the family as she expressed her good impression of the family and thankfulness for them taking care of her daughter.

since she had a good time with the family,she thanks for their help of taking care of her daughter,and expresses her good impression of their family.感觉怪怪的.