能将这篇短文错的地方找出来么 .

能将这篇短文错的地方找出来么 .
Dear editor
Some years ago ,my hometown was used to be beautiful place.Thick trees and grass can be seen all over the hills .As time going by ,people destroyed almost the whole forest grow more crops .To make matters worse ,people let their cattles eat up the grass .So you can only see wasteland instead green forests now .As aresult of,when it rains,the soil is washed down the hills and into the rives .Strongly winds also blow away the valuable soil lie on the top of the fields.
I hope all thepeople will take good care of the forestes but plant more trees to improve our living conditions