求改一下这篇英语短文.Last summer holiday,I take a vacation with my parents.We went to the natural park and saw many kinds of animals in the park.There are tigers ,monkeys,pandas,lions and bears.But there are a lot of garbage,so they seems not happy.Their life in the natural park ,people should not destroy their home.I will never forget the tirp to the natural park.错的地方说明一下、
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求改一下这篇英语短文.
Last summer holiday,I take a vacation with my parents.We went to the natural park and saw many kinds of animals in the park.There are tigers ,monkeys,pandas,lions and bears.But there are a lot of garbage,so they seems not happy.Their life in the natural park ,people should not destroy their home.I will never forget the tirp to the natural park.
错的地方说明一下、
答
Last summer holiday,i toke(此为讲述上个暑假的事,时态应统一为过去时) a vacation to natural park with my parents.We have seen many kinds of animals.Such as tiger,monkey,panda,lion and bear.But there were so many garbage in the park that those animals seem unhappy.They live in the natural park,we,people should not destroy their home.All in all,i'll never forget the trip.