英语作文 the pollution in my hongtown

My hometown is very dirty.
There is many plasic bag on the sky . The sky isn,t blue,is not white either.It is black .
The pollutian is on the sky.Pollution make us more unhealthy .our lungs are unhealthy,beacuse
pollution can make a lot of CO1.it can hurt us .
how can make our hometown clean?
(这是一个6年级小学生的回答）

I was born in XXX. XXX is my hometown.In the past, my hometown was just a village.There are only small houses, big fields and beautiful environment.With the rapid development, geat changes have taken place in my hometown .However, many problems also came with the changes. The most serrious problem is water pollution. Many chemical factores produce toxic waste water.and pour it into the river.Many people throw litters around and contaminated the water. Therefore, the water that can be drunk has become less and less.Many fish in the river have gone dead It is a sad thing that not all the people know that water is a very important element for everyone.I hope the poeple all over the world can stop polluting the water.

The pollution in my hometown
My hometown used to be beautiful.The river was very clean and clear.There was many beautiful fishes in it.The sky was very blue .The trees are very green .But now there is much pollution.The water is very dirty in the river.We can't find any fishes in it.It feels very terrible.So we can't swim in it anymore.There are many plastic bags everywhere.They are in the tree.They are in the river.It makes our environment very dirty.I can't stand it.Return me my beautiful hometown!