这句英语没问题吧,谁来修改一下,感觉怪怪的
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这句英语没问题吧,谁来修改一下,感觉怪怪的
English has become an aim to many people,especially to university students because of the rapid development of communication internationally.
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小小的建议:第一句主语要改;aim指目标,理想,愿望,但此处表意是追逐的对象,比较具体;大学生最好用college students,如果专指本科生用undergraduates会更简洁一些;最后用一个名词表意会更地道一点.
Learning English has become a pursuit/goal of many people, especially college students because of the rapid development of international communication.