大家帮忙看看这个英语故事有没有语法错误一定要正确的..

大家帮忙看看这个英语故事有没有语法错误一定要正确的..
A wolf had been badly wounded by dogs.He lay sick and maimed in his lair.He felt very hungry and thirsty.When a sheep passed by,he asked him to fetch some water from the stream."If you bring me the water," he said,"I will find means to get some food." "Yes," said the sheep,"if I bring you the water,you would undoubtedly make me your food."
一只狼被狗所咬,伤势很严重,痛苦地躺在巢穴里,不能外出觅食.他感到又饿又渴,这时,他看见一只羊,便请求他到附近的小河里为他取一点水来.“你给我一点水解渴”,他说,“我就能自己去寻找食物了.”“是呀”,羊回答说,“如果我给你送水喝,那么我就会成为你的食物.”
另外,谎言是经不起推敲的,它很容易被人们识破.”用英语这样对吗?This tells us that the lie is not deliberated,it is very easy to be seen through.