they argue that through the mobile phone message can be send out quickly,which makes people communicate with each other more and better.这具话有错吗?

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they argue that through the mobile phone message can be send out quickly,which makes people communicate with each other more and better.这具话有错吗?

有,不通顺,sent out 不能指代信息的发出

你send没用过去分词啊 应该被动 sent
剩下的都不错 小定语从句用的 恩恩