they argue that through the mobile phone message can be send out quickly,which makes people communicate with each other

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they argue that through the mobile phone message can be send out quickly,which makes people communicate with each other more and better.这具话有错吗?

你send没用过去分词啊 应该被动 sent
剩下的都不错 小定语从句用的 恩恩