"You happy are the joy of my life" 有没语法错误?

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"You happy are the joy of my life" 有没语法错误?

you 改成your 你的
happy要用名词happiness
are 要改成is
后面的差不多合理.
所以改成 your happiness is the joy of my life、
也可以换个方向改 making you happy is the joy of my life、