求英语达人帮我看看这份自我介绍点评下,hello,every one,my name is XXX,glad to meet you in No.2 high schoolSo,let me introduce myself.I am a true man,and my hobby is wacting movies,I have seen many real great movies,like 、、and more.Though I like English movies,but I have problems in English.Even so,my favorite one word is Life is like a box of Chocolets,you never konw what you're going to get.That's all,thanks.有什么语法错误帮忙看看 改正
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求英语达人帮我看看这份自我介绍点评下,
hello,every one,my name is XXX,glad to meet you in No.2 high school
So,let me introduce myself.I am a true man,and my hobby is wacting movies,I have seen many real great movies,like 、、and more.Though I like English movies,but I have problems in English.Even so,my favorite one word is Life is like a box of Chocolets,you never konw what you're going to get.That's all,thanks.
有什么语法错误帮忙看看 改正
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写的不错 没啥错误 很棒 加油啊
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有两个英文打错了,在第二排and my hobby is 【wacting】movies,应该是【watching】,还有一个是【Chocolets】,其他的都还蛮通顺的,不过你还可以在在一些自己的爱好,特长什么的,这样可以让别人更加认识你!望采纳!