帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病

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帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病
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The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and siter all study in university,so she lives with her mother now,Shawn Johnson is her idol.
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The second number is Xiaoming.Nothing he likes very much and he hard English best.He and his partner Xiaodong,there are all five number in their family.
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Xiaodong is 17 years old.There is a borther and a siter in his family.He is the most small one.Xiaodong has many hobbies,such as playing computer game,watching TV,plaing basketball and so on.

1.The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but her English is poor.Her borther and siter all study in un...