帮忙看一下句子有没有什么语病I who can't spell the word have to look it up in the dictionary

问题描述:

帮忙看一下句子有没有什么语病
I who can't spell the word have to look it up in the dictionary

没有什么问题吧,
不过这个句子感觉不是很顺
如果这样改:
When I can't spell a word,I have to look it up in the dictionary.
你在这里,用一个句子I的定语来强调,是应该用在特殊强调的场合吧