英语好的请进来帮我 求你了

英语好的请进来帮我 求你了
I have an ordinary mother but i feel very lucky because she gave me I need it the most,the real motherly love
when i was young I remember when I caught a fever at midnight last year,my mum took me to the hospital as fast as she could.When we got home after my injection,it was about 5 oclock in the early morning.My mum only slept 2 hours because she had to wake up at 7 oclock to prepare breakfast for me,and then she went to work.She must be very tired that day.
I love my mother very much she just Like many other Chinese women,my mother is diligent .kind and sincere.She gets along with her neighbors and colleagues.When they have
difficulties,she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand.Therefore she is loved and respected in our neighborhood.
Mother often tells me to be honest and upright.She expects me to be useful to the people in the future.Up to now,I still remember her saying:Do as much as you can and you will succeed.
My mother is also a thrifty and industrious woman.She saves every penny that she can to keep everything in order .she often says to me," work while you work,play while you play.If you did not work,you will become lazy and of no use to the society."I think she is right
My mum is not very beautiful,but I admire and love her
Finally,the most important is:first,I most don't want to describe people is my mother
i think any specific adjective for mother's love for me is a blasphemy
But my English is very bad
But eventually I decided to speak
Because I hope these can play little effect
Study is bad is okay,but don't harm the body,less eat snacks .less play computer
spend more time with parents ,and talk to them
that also is piety
这是我写的 为了我妈妈 语法哪里错误了可以指出来吗?只要复制粘贴下来错的那句话就可以了 我自己弄明白在哪了 另外如果对这片短文有很么建议求你一定要讲给我